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Brendan Ford Ford থেকে 40060 Toscanella BO, Italy থেকে 40060 Toscanella BO, Italy

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Brendan Ford Ford থেকে 40060 Toscanella BO, Italy

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Quite nice story, though it left lot of background story. Personally I didn't think that the theme suitable for a short-story, moreover when the setting needs further explanation. It could be suitable when the story took a setting in usual werewolf mating theme (both werewolf, usual custom), but in this there're half-breed werewolf, with half-human, half-wolf appearance that need further exploration, I think. And somehow the secondaries character demand an explanation also (view spoiler). So I guess this story gonna be better with more length, maybe with at least 200 pages, not under 50 pages.