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Inus Pretorius Pretorius থেকে Brochocin, Poland থেকে Brochocin, Poland

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Inus Pretorius Pretorius থেকে Brochocin, Poland

inuspretorius

If it were just about the smut, this would get 3 or 4 stars. Unfortunately, a very clichéd plot was involved, and it was poorly done at that. The author couldn't be bothered to write something that made sense, so she went for the easiest, least believable option, and made her protagonist unforgivably stupid. She wasted tons of time in this book (which should have been about 100 pages shorter)on scenes that were completely irrelevant, but which I'm assuming she found amusing. The smut was pretty good. She should stick with what she knows, or go to plot writing workshops to build her talent.